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I made this comic in my school because I was very boring , it´s in Spanish, so I´m going to translate it from spanish to english.

#1° The Best Comic.

Scene 1: Narrator: One day John and his friends were walking when...
Scene 2: Mac: It looks like it´s going to be a storm.
Scene 3: Paco: Yeah, it would be better go or we may be struck by a lightning.
Scene 4: John: Come on guys, do not think we can drop a ray.
Scene 5: SQRIICH!! "A ray struck John." John: Ahh! Mac: Oh!
Scene 6: Mac: We have to go before another ray hit us!
Scene 7: Paco: Don´t worry, two rays can´t fall over the same place.
Scene 8: SKIICH!! "Another ray struck John" Jhon: Ah!! Paco: Oh!
Scene 9: Jhon: Au!!
Scene 10: SPANSH!!! "Another five rays struck John" xD
Scene 11: Paco: Well, apparently I´m wrong.
Scene 12: John: Really think so? (sarcasm)
Scene 13: Mac: Oh my god! Look!
Scene 14: "The city is being destroyed by a lot of rays"
Scene 15: Paco: Oh my god! They´re destroying the city!

Check the second page[link] . And sorry for my bad english.

I hope you like it, leave your comments.